Because of comments and general displeased with my current product, I'm re-writing and starting on Version 0.8, aka, 2nd Draft. Hopefully it will be a big enough of an improvement.
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Prologue
By the looks of things, it seemed to be just another Friday afternoon. The end of another dreary week as the sound of door slamming shut with a sharp giving a sigh of relief, mostly likely towards that the weekend had FINALLY arrived. From the looks of the room, it seemed to be a simple dorm at a university. Plain dark blue walls which betrayed the age of the tiny housing unit in question, with some of the paint fading and cracks in the plaster. A dull grey carpet scuffed with constantly moved furniture and the basics. A single bed that looked particularly uncomfortable, a kitchen which was...serviceable at best and a bathroom which was the most modern addition.
He looked like barely twenty, if that, his facial features were basically consisted of two hazel eyes, mouse-brown hair which was cut short and was cleanly shaved, although by the looks, it'd taken some time to get the hang of, with a few minor cuts, most likely from said attempts. As for his choice in clothing, it was just simple black jacket soaked with rain, a grey shirt and matching pants. Dull, simple, either the uniform or clothes close enough to pass for it.
On that subject, ‘Mother Nature' had certainly been kind or at the very least, nice enough to keep him looking in average physical shape, although probably not enough to do anything beyond running, jumping, swimming...not much else. Either way, he looked tired as if he hadn't slept in days. The noise at night probably didn't help with this matter. Thankfully, looking at the paperwork and assignments with high marks showed it wasn't affecting his studying ability by too much.
Speaking of noise, there were letters near the door addressed from people on campus, most likely invitations to parties, celebrations and generally occasions to get drunk...along with other things. Each one was un-opened, showing he'd turned down every offer. He probably had better, more constructive matters to do with his time.
Tossing his bag next to the PC, it took only a few moments to boot up, while he stared at his reflecting in the meantime. Nowhere near attractive enough to be royalty, but probably enough to have people interested in him. In either case, it made life somewhat easier. ...It was the most up-to-date thing in the house, despite it constantly downloading data for programs so they could STAY that way. Giving a slight sigh and flipping through the books to see what was happening next week. Sports. Well...a change of pace would probably be welcome at the very least.
Realizing that it was taking an eternity to get started, the youth simply let himself drop onto the bed with a thud, that hard mattress absorbing his fall, but was unable to rest despite how much today’s physical and mental exercises had drained him. Typical. If it was any consolation, the rain falling was somewhat relaxing as he glanced out the window and then back to the monitor. Oddly enough, a digital pattern with unknown characters scrolled across with the words ‘Gateway Construction Complete’ taking up a majority of the screen. It had no relativity to the patches nor any other program that was installed on the computer.
“Life-form detected. Beginning transfer...”
Before he had a chance to re-act beyond wondering why the words had appeared on the monitor or where the voice in question came from, there was a deafening roar as a vortex of swirling energy suddenly materialized in the middle of the room in an instant. Blinded by some rapid flashes of lightning which lashed out at random, reducing all it touched into...well, they simply vanished.
Trying to fight the strain as this ‘gateway’ began to draw everything else towards it, there was nothing he could use to try and resist this powerful force. Like it mattered. A second wave of powerful bolts lashed out from the vortex, one hitting the youth squarely in the chest. Searing pain coursed through his entire being. The feeling of blood boiling...and unable to stand any longer as everything started to grow heavy as he collapsed into a heap on the floor, eyesight and consciousness dimming as the vortex continued to rage.
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-Elsewhere-
“Great, just great! C-C'mon, we gotta hurry and take advantage of the situation! Especially since we should be somewhat thankful that it’s started raining. I mean, sure, it's almost impossible to see with my hair in my eyes and it's gonna take forever to get it right again. Damnit! Why’d this have to happen...?!” a figure yelled, his voice nearly drowned out by the storm and wind. As such, it was hard to make out any obvious features about the young man as he ran through the dead of night. The rain was pouring down heavily making it difficult to see and while a sudden flash of lightning revealed a faint outline to confirm he was indeed male without any distinguishing features, or rather, noticeable ones in the night...apart from his lower legs/feet which seemed to be talons.
His frantic run came to a stop as he turned around when he noticed no reply from his complaint, he reached down to help a second figure who’d fallen over.
“C’mon, sis! We’ve gotta keep goin'! I know it’s ain't easy, especially given the circumstances...but we don't have time to stop, otherwise...well, w-we know what'll happen if we do!” the male figure shouted, helping his sister up.
The girl said nothing, barely able to speak and simply nodded at her brother. While they both shared the taloned legs, the only other visible difference was that the other figure was more feminine and had slightly longer hair. Without another word, they continued their desperate race for escape, even though their legs weren’t meant for this sort of task, not to mention it was surprising how fast they were managing to travel through the storm and forest. Yet despite whatever was pursuing them would be at a disadvantage, there would be little doubt it...whatever it was would be close behind.
“Brother...Are we...Are we going to be okay? I’m...Aah!” the girl cried, tripping over something once again.
Obviously concerned about his sister’s well-being, if somewhat annoyed at her general clumsiness, he turned around to help her up once again only to notice WHAT she’d fallen over. A young man, likely about their age was lying there, unmoving. He was bleeding and by the looks of it, was unconscious and barely clinging on to life. Brown hair, dull clothing which seemed slightly singed...he looked rather out of place.
Great...As if we didn’t have enough problems...
“Brother...we can’t just leave him here. If the rain or cold doesn’t kill him then...then...” she trailed off, her voice pleading.
He sighed. While more intent on getting away to safety, his conscious would never let him be able to get over from leaving someone helpless in the mercy of this storm...or...what was chasing them. Giving another exhaled breath of frustration, he struggled to pick up the young man. Glancing into the distance, the faint sight of light was visible. A village. Shelter. Giving a nod to his sister, he headed in that direction, trying not to complain carrying the extra weight.
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Prologue
By the looks of things, it seemed to be just another Friday afternoon. The end of another dreary week as the sound of door slamming shut with a sharp giving a sigh of relief, mostly likely towards that the weekend had FINALLY arrived. From the looks of the room, it seemed to be a simple dorm at a university. Plain dark blue walls which betrayed the age of the tiny housing unit in question, with some of the paint fading and cracks in the plaster. A dull grey carpet scuffed with constantly moved furniture and the basics. A single bed that looked particularly uncomfortable, a kitchen which was...serviceable at best and a bathroom which was the most modern addition.
He looked like barely twenty, if that, his facial features were basically consisted of two hazel eyes, mouse-brown hair which was cut short and was cleanly shaved, although by the looks, it'd taken some time to get the hang of, with a few minor cuts, most likely from said attempts. As for his choice in clothing, it was just simple black jacket soaked with rain, a grey shirt and matching pants. Dull, simple, either the uniform or clothes close enough to pass for it.
On that subject, ‘Mother Nature' had certainly been kind or at the very least, nice enough to keep him looking in average physical shape, although probably not enough to do anything beyond running, jumping, swimming...not much else. Either way, he looked tired as if he hadn't slept in days. The noise at night probably didn't help with this matter. Thankfully, looking at the paperwork and assignments with high marks showed it wasn't affecting his studying ability by too much.
Speaking of noise, there were letters near the door addressed from people on campus, most likely invitations to parties, celebrations and generally occasions to get drunk...along with other things. Each one was un-opened, showing he'd turned down every offer. He probably had better, more constructive matters to do with his time.
Tossing his bag next to the PC, it took only a few moments to boot up, while he stared at his reflecting in the meantime. Nowhere near attractive enough to be royalty, but probably enough to have people interested in him. In either case, it made life somewhat easier. ...It was the most up-to-date thing in the house, despite it constantly downloading data for programs so they could STAY that way. Giving a slight sigh and flipping through the books to see what was happening next week. Sports. Well...a change of pace would probably be welcome at the very least.
Realizing that it was taking an eternity to get started, the youth simply let himself drop onto the bed with a thud, that hard mattress absorbing his fall, but was unable to rest despite how much today’s physical and mental exercises had drained him. Typical. If it was any consolation, the rain falling was somewhat relaxing as he glanced out the window and then back to the monitor. Oddly enough, a digital pattern with unknown characters scrolled across with the words ‘Gateway Construction Complete’ taking up a majority of the screen. It had no relativity to the patches nor any other program that was installed on the computer.
“Life-form detected. Beginning transfer...”
Before he had a chance to re-act beyond wondering why the words had appeared on the monitor or where the voice in question came from, there was a deafening roar as a vortex of swirling energy suddenly materialized in the middle of the room in an instant. Blinded by some rapid flashes of lightning which lashed out at random, reducing all it touched into...well, they simply vanished.
Trying to fight the strain as this ‘gateway’ began to draw everything else towards it, there was nothing he could use to try and resist this powerful force. Like it mattered. A second wave of powerful bolts lashed out from the vortex, one hitting the youth squarely in the chest. Searing pain coursed through his entire being. The feeling of blood boiling...and unable to stand any longer as everything started to grow heavy as he collapsed into a heap on the floor, eyesight and consciousness dimming as the vortex continued to rage.
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-Elsewhere-
“Great, just great! C-C'mon, we gotta hurry and take advantage of the situation! Especially since we should be somewhat thankful that it’s started raining. I mean, sure, it's almost impossible to see with my hair in my eyes and it's gonna take forever to get it right again. Damnit! Why’d this have to happen...?!” a figure yelled, his voice nearly drowned out by the storm and wind. As such, it was hard to make out any obvious features about the young man as he ran through the dead of night. The rain was pouring down heavily making it difficult to see and while a sudden flash of lightning revealed a faint outline to confirm he was indeed male without any distinguishing features, or rather, noticeable ones in the night...apart from his lower legs/feet which seemed to be talons.
His frantic run came to a stop as he turned around when he noticed no reply from his complaint, he reached down to help a second figure who’d fallen over.
“C’mon, sis! We’ve gotta keep goin'! I know it’s ain't easy, especially given the circumstances...but we don't have time to stop, otherwise...well, w-we know what'll happen if we do!” the male figure shouted, helping his sister up.
The girl said nothing, barely able to speak and simply nodded at her brother. While they both shared the taloned legs, the only other visible difference was that the other figure was more feminine and had slightly longer hair. Without another word, they continued their desperate race for escape, even though their legs weren’t meant for this sort of task, not to mention it was surprising how fast they were managing to travel through the storm and forest. Yet despite whatever was pursuing them would be at a disadvantage, there would be little doubt it...whatever it was would be close behind.
“Brother...Are we...Are we going to be okay? I’m...Aah!” the girl cried, tripping over something once again.
Obviously concerned about his sister’s well-being, if somewhat annoyed at her general clumsiness, he turned around to help her up once again only to notice WHAT she’d fallen over. A young man, likely about their age was lying there, unmoving. He was bleeding and by the looks of it, was unconscious and barely clinging on to life. Brown hair, dull clothing which seemed slightly singed...he looked rather out of place.
Great...As if we didn’t have enough problems...
“Brother...we can’t just leave him here. If the rain or cold doesn’t kill him then...then...” she trailed off, her voice pleading.
He sighed. While more intent on getting away to safety, his conscious would never let him be able to get over from leaving someone helpless in the mercy of this storm...or...what was chasing them. Giving another exhaled breath of frustration, he struggled to pick up the young man. Glancing into the distance, the faint sight of light was visible. A village. Shelter. Giving a nod to his sister, he headed in that direction, trying not to complain carrying the extra weight.